Comments on: Freelance Show & Tell https://wordsonpageblog.com/2017/04/freelance-show-tell.html a freelance writing resource. Thu, 06 Apr 2017 15:32:36 +0000 hourly 1 By: lwidmer https://wordsonpageblog.com/2017/04/freelance-show-tell.html#comment-16327 Thu, 06 Apr 2017 15:32:36 +0000 http://wordsonpageblog.com/?p=5855#comment-16327 In reply to Paula Hendrickson.

For me, it’s DSW shoe ads. LOL Shoes are the monkey on my back.

Exactly that, Paula. Boring. There’s no life, or reason to care, given in such boring content.

]]> By: Paula Hendrickson https://wordsonpageblog.com/2017/04/freelance-show-tell.html#comment-16325 Thu, 06 Apr 2017 14:58:25 +0000 http://wordsonpageblog.com/?p=5855#comment-16325 Frank’s first example reads like a lot of the corporate bios that come in for me to edit. Only those start every other sentence with either “Prior to that,” or “Previously.” So boring! (And they’re all money manager types so they love bragging.)

I think we might have the same reaction to the steakhouse ads, Lori. Whenever I see an ad that shows meat cooking or being sliced into it turns my stomach, but I’m thankful I don’t have to smell it, too.

While I’ve never stood in line for the latest anything (my iPhone is a hand-me-down and I really wish someone would have another to hand down soon). But I’m a sucker for a good yarn ad.

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